Nov 15, 2013, 11:52
Nov 18, 2013, 10:48
(Nov 15, 2013, 11:52)funkymunky Wrote: [ -> ]and more
The lions. Why B&W? And so little contrast? The composition is awkward. Dead center again.
The monkey. Weird color. Interesting bokeh though.
The bee. You love dead center. I would crop it so the bee is on the right thirds line.
Your family? Cute snapshot. Way too much depth of field.
Now you're getting somewhere. Repetition. Diagonals from a corner.
If you can shoot that again, try it with an even stronger angle to the diagonal.
Nov 18, 2013, 18:25
Nov 19, 2013, 05:09
Wall-E is right - too much dead centre. Nothing wrong with dead centre per se, but if that is what you do, you need some other dynamic in the picture to make it work - usually it doesn't.
And I agree with Mr B - you do not need the green in the ironwork. Personally, I would have gone for a more vertical shot and made the lines do everything.
And I agree with Mr B - you do not need the green in the ironwork. Personally, I would have gone for a more vertical shot and made the lines do everything.
Nov 23, 2013, 02:08
thanks peeps, i do like that trailer, i think i spent about and 1hr or so around, i dont know why i chose dead centre its not something i do all the time. i have decided to stick with landscape views for my work. so i will be posting more later on today. thanks again for your critiques i am finding it very useful.