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I would like very much if you can give me your comments about the lines in this picture... Do you think it is ok?

Thanks in advance

I love it. The diffusion and warm muted colors make the place seem so inviting.

Great soft focus / glow effect! I think the crop / composition is just right too... great that you've focused on the windows -- you can just see enough of the inside to want to peer in...

Great photo. I agree with the points Toad mention exactly. I might try rotating it a bit just to see how it looks.

Very nice!

Great shot, love the soft focus. Once again, great picture.

sweet. It would be better if you straightened the doorline just parallel to the frame.

Don Schaeffer Wrote:sweet. It would be better if you straightened the doorline just parallel to the frame.

Got to disagree there Don.
Doing that would make odd angles elswhere, which would damage the feel, IMHO.

Hi

uuhmm this is what I think the lines are ok but is that other light at the bottom that distract your eyes from the main one.








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Thanks a lot for your comments... I am very happy to read from you all

@Rufus: You are right. Before I posted my picture I tried to do what Don suggested and happend what you said.

@Christian: I like your crop is very clean... but also, somehow it takes a way a lot of the mood ...

I think the crop has to do very much with the story behind the picture, and what you want to tell the others about that story.