DSLR Photography Forum

Here is a shot of the Entrance to a wedding I recently shot. Tear me down and build me up folks.

Your Mom dresses you funny!

Nice atmosphere. Nice softening.
A bit yellow, and too many hotspots for a 10/10 though.

Here'a my score:

Intent: 9/10
Comp: 7/10
Tech 7/10
Aesthetics 8/10
Clarity 8/10
Biscuits 0/10

I think you have a lot of possibilities with your picture, because it is really nice.

I would first clean it a little with a crop, leaving out the christmas trees.

I agree with Rufus in the color, to my eyes is a little too yellow, so I would play with the colors you have around, maybe darkening the outside, I have tried with Authomatic color balance and it works fine...

Hope it helps Jerry...

I like the burnished look of this. It looks slick like new brass. Maybe a little color balance is in order to reduce yellow. But it looks very rich to me.

--Don

Jerry: I like the gold color cast although I think some might say that is too much - it still gives a very sunny feeling to th occasion.

Where it needs a little work is:

- Rotate the photo 0.5 degree counterclockwise to correct the tilt
- Burn the letters "Crystal Room" in a bit to make them more readable

The thing that I think would be the most difficult to correct is the reflection on the sign out front - not sure what you can do about that, however.

JMO
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