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[attachment=6937]Hello every one,been away for awhile ...give me your take on this one please...Wes
Hi Wes,

For my eye it needs more light in here face, she seems underexposed. I also think the shutter speed could have been increased with more light, to minimize the motion blur in the image. Compositionally I would have liked a little more room at the top, the ears are very close to the edge of the frame.

I love the background blur, the bokeh and tones are fantastic.
(Apr 17, 2017, 11:09)EnglishBob Wrote: [ -> ]Hi Wes,

For my eye it needs more light in here face, she seems underexposed.  I also think the shutter speed could have been increased with more light, to minimize the motion blur in the image.  Compositionally I would have liked a little more room at the top, the ears are very close to the edge of the frame.

I love the background blur, the bokeh and tones are fantastic.
Thanks Bob for your input much appreciated,Wes
Bit dark on my monitor, I see something like this, done from a small file. Agree with Craig. Cheers. Ed.
Hello Wes.

It is a pleasant shot of the girl and I agree that she is rather dark in this image. However, even so, the bright yellow and green orbs in the background are just too much of a distraction for me. It might have been better to have been closer to the subject and with flash, to make the background a bit more out-of-focus and muted. Alternatively, blur and darken it in software.

Just a different opinion, of course.

Cheers.
Philip
Thank you all for your comments and advice...Wes