Feb 13, 2005, 07:17
Feb 14, 2005, 05:32
In this one Brett, I would have cropped a little tighter to avoid the tree in the left part and a light spot in the right part. About the color, I think it is just matter of taste, I would have gone for a less color picture sort of duotone and sharp a bit more.
Irma.
![[Image: brettmorningsunshine.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/brettmorningsunshine.jpg)
Irma.
![[Image: brettmorningsunshine.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/brettmorningsunshine.jpg)
Feb 14, 2005, 06:14
I like the J-rays in the sky, but I don't care for the guard rail in the foreground - I would clone that out. Unfortunately, that makes the foreground pretty dark and blends in too much with the island/peninsula. Also the branchy thing in the upper right not good.
I think with this one a much tighter crop is the ticket - again crappy 2 second edit.
![[Image: 96_test2.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/96_test2.jpg)
You can do more also with exposyre and contrast - but the crop is the right place to start.
I think with this one a much tighter crop is the ticket - again crappy 2 second edit.
![[Image: 96_test2.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/96_test2.jpg)
You can do more also with exposyre and contrast - but the crop is the right place to start.
Feb 14, 2005, 10:19
I love the colour... absolutely lovely. 
