Feb 13, 2005, 11:55
Feb 14, 2005, 10:25
No2 stands out for me because of the colour. I'm not quite sure if I like the subject or the way it overlaps the subject in the background as well.
No3 is great for colour of lack thereof - really reflects the cemetary theme.
I like how you're playing with a foreground subject in focus and also a out of focus subject in the background. Just make sure they're both interesting...
No3 is great for colour of lack thereof - really reflects the cemetary theme.
I like how you're playing with a foreground subject in focus and also a out of focus subject in the background. Just make sure they're both interesting...

Feb 14, 2005, 11:30
#3 I really like... #2 could do with a different crop, I think... #1 doesn't appeal to me - I find the bars distracting...
EDIT:
#2 - something like this maybe?
![[Image: cemetrypink1_cail.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/cemetrypink1_cail.jpg)
EDIT:
#2 - something like this maybe?
![[Image: cemetrypink1_cail.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/cemetrypink1_cail.jpg)
Feb 14, 2005, 12:31
ST. Your last paragraph gave me a lot...
Cailean: Your crop is a very good. It helps to stand out what I wanted "Color" in the Cemetery.... Very good idea...
I think I didn't get quite well what I wanted to express with #1.... Probably it is not even significant.... There is a beautiful song about the Cemetery that was sung by Mecano a Spanish Band. It is so nice because it's sort of a story and it speaks about the deads having funn at night... From the door the cemetery was looking so colorful and happy, but I think I couldn't deliver the message with this picture. Anyway I will try it again any other time.
Thanks a lot ! Very good comments and feedback. Lots of things to think next time.
Irma.
Cailean: Your crop is a very good. It helps to stand out what I wanted "Color" in the Cemetery.... Very good idea...
I think I didn't get quite well what I wanted to express with #1.... Probably it is not even significant.... There is a beautiful song about the Cemetery that was sung by Mecano a Spanish Band. It is so nice because it's sort of a story and it speaks about the deads having funn at night... From the door the cemetery was looking so colorful and happy, but I think I couldn't deliver the message with this picture. Anyway I will try it again any other time.
Thanks a lot ! Very good comments and feedback. Lots of things to think next time.

Irma.
Feb 17, 2005, 15:38
Great set of shots though #2 is my fave, Looking at the photo and the silloutte of the grave it shows that life can survive even with death all around ....less this is me looking to much into the photo.
Feb 19, 2005, 02:09
Lovely thought about my picture Brett, thanks for your comment 
