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Thoughts on improvements?

Hi Jerry!

The greens look a bit too loud to me. Too light, and too saturated.
BUT, that's just my feelings.

I thought it may be too saturated as well. I think I have been looking at it too long. A fresh look will be useful tomorrow.

Thanks Rufus. I'll repost later.

Here is a repost, with less saturation and a bit more sharpening. Better?

hmmm... maybe still too light. DRATS!

Looks a bit hard now Jerry.

Interesting concept, Jerry!

Back to the PSing board....

I like more the first one because of the colors. I think they are a bit bright but I really like it as it is.

Jerry:

I think the second one is oversharpened - it kind of crackles. First attempt is much better, but I don't think the waterfall, strangely enough adds much to it - the highlights are a bit blown and too far away.

What I like in #1 is the little waterfall at the bottom and the jumbled sticks above it - if I may suggest - a much tighter crop might give you more here.

Best
T

I agree Rob. I have been struggling to include the top waterfall when it just doesn't belong in this picture. Poorly exposed. A tighter crop coming up.

Thanks J