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In the first picture I would remove the blue sign. it is a bit distracting. In this way, I would give more attention to the people walking. I would crop like so. It gives to me more sense of depth, and the isle with plants wouldn't be too centered.

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Because of the crop you did in this one I would like to make it B&W, and remove the light spots around... I find them a bit distracting.

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The third one, I am really sorry, but I can't find the message. There is a lot of information in the image...

Hope this helps.
Irma.
Nice Don. I think it might work maybe as part of a series?