Jun 26, 2005, 16:56
Joyce on our daily walk
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Jun 26, 2005, 19:28
I like this, composition and subject wise - but I can suggest a couple of improvements.
I don't care for the tilted horizon. I have seen this on many of your shots and sometimes that works wonderfully - but not on this one - it makes Joyce look disorientated - which I think is not your goal.
I also would like to see a little more room around the main subject. It feels very cramped as if Joyce would slam into the ceiling if she raised herself up.
I also would like to see this more straight on with the path stetching straight in front rather than the path and Joyce being at a slight angle. This would give a satifying 2D (with perspective) look.
I think this one has potential. I would try a reshoot on your next walk.
I don't care for the tilted horizon. I have seen this on many of your shots and sometimes that works wonderfully - but not on this one - it makes Joyce look disorientated - which I think is not your goal.
I also would like to see a little more room around the main subject. It feels very cramped as if Joyce would slam into the ceiling if she raised herself up.
I also would like to see this more straight on with the path stetching straight in front rather than the path and Joyce being at a slight angle. This would give a satifying 2D (with perspective) look.
I think this one has potential. I would try a reshoot on your next walk.
Jun 26, 2005, 22:14
Thanks Toad. It needs a re-shoot because if I straightened the horizon on this, Joyce would be tilted.