Nice - I like it!
I know this is a poor critique but I am getting packed to go for 2 weeks to South Carolina - can only reply on a gut level.
Very nice picture Don. I find the white of the car at the left and the white in the stand ? at the right competing with the white of the lady's dress.... Perhaps if you could work with these colors?
Thanks Toad, have a good time.
Irma, that is a valuable suggestion. Thanks.
--Don
How is this Irma?
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I get the adjustment - I still like the orignl.
BTW: SC won't be a good time - lovely State (polite, friendly and southern hospitality) but I am installing software - no fun - just mindless hard work.
Dull accounting software or something creative?
--Don
Mobile wireless software for the medical radiography industry.
I like the second one much better, Don... and I like it because now I can see how the dress is moving!!

In your first one I couldn't appreciate this because there was a white line from the car the same color as the dress. ..... Now I can see a very nice curve and the wave of the dress... Nicely done...
