Nov 9, 2005, 11:09
Nov 9, 2005, 11:13
Great shots Ruf. I like the changes you have made. She definately looks to be having fun.
Nov 9, 2005, 11:16
Thanks man!
I think youngster and I are both learning!
Now I need more room and proper lights, or cash to hire the studio again! :o

I think youngster and I are both learning!
Now I need more room and proper lights, or cash to hire the studio again! :o
Nov 9, 2005, 11:24
Super - I like #1 the best. One issue - it looks like she is leaning against the white line. If she was actually leaning on a rail or something - you may want to see what that photo looks like with her left arm Photoshopped out. It might look funny - but as-is it breaks the feeling of incredible balance that the rest of the photo exhibits.
#2 works very well - maybe increase your canvas size slightly and add some blue background on the left so that her hand is not touching the frame of the photo.
#3 - perfect - grabs the mood and tone very well. Is that a PhotoShopped floodlight? If so - I did this trick a while ago with the dance portfolio I did. Works really well - doesn't it?
#2 works very well - maybe increase your canvas size slightly and add some blue background on the left so that her hand is not touching the frame of the photo.
#3 - perfect - grabs the mood and tone very well. Is that a PhotoShopped floodlight? If so - I did this trick a while ago with the dance portfolio I did. Works really well - doesn't it?
Nov 9, 2005, 12:08
I wouldn't know what to criticize on your pictures. They look great Rufus... She looks gorgeous and so happy in the last one...
Very nice work from the model and the photographer
Very nice work from the model and the photographer

Nov 9, 2005, 14:03
I'm greatly encouraged!!!
Thank you.
Mr T. Now then, this arm-on-the-rail is an interesting issue.
She isnt actually holding/touching anything. I put the BG in to give the impression of a support. But, maybe that's a pretty daft thing to do, after all, the balance is the thing..... :/ .......Hmmmm.........
Canvas size. Quite right. She jumped so high that the BG was lost, (on the ceiling). I repaired the image, but it's too constricted, isnt it? :/
Yes, thank you. It is a PSCS2 flood. Fun 'eh?
Irma.
Thank you!!!

Thank you.
Mr T. Now then, this arm-on-the-rail is an interesting issue.

Canvas size. Quite right. She jumped so high that the BG was lost, (on the ceiling). I repaired the image, but it's too constricted, isnt it? :/
Yes, thank you. It is a PSCS2 flood. Fun 'eh?
Irma.
Thank you!!!
Nov 9, 2005, 14:52
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Had to fake the finger!!!!!
Nov 9, 2005, 14:54
Much better! As for the rail/balance thing - its your call - just an opinion.
Nov 9, 2005, 14:56
Ah, thank you Mr T!
I will try a different "rail" image later.... Or tomorrow.
Needless to say, I have 40-odd new pics to play with!!

I will try a different "rail" image later.... Or tomorrow.
Needless to say, I have 40-odd new pics to play with!!

Nov 9, 2005, 18:44
hi
the last one i like. simple
regards
christian
the last one i like. simple
regards
christian
Nov 9, 2005, 18:52
Great pics - so full of fun and life...
Nov 10, 2005, 02:46
I love the last pic best too. I have to ask though, what sort of backdrop are you using? is this one of those chromakey ones or something?
Nov 10, 2005, 03:37
Great folks! Thank you.
Schell.......... Nope. It's just a bed sheet.

Schell.......... Nope. It's just a bed sheet.