I took this on the forth when I was waiting for the show to begin.
I took this with a 13 second exposer at F14.
Flickr page.
Thanks for the feedback.
A bit too busy for my personal taste but I had a look through your flickr albums. You have some fantastic plane shots. Welcome aboard t0ny.

You know what I would do Tony, I would darken the top so it's darker than the bottom and highlight the bottom of the frame. I love that movement effect and the realtively sharp figures on the left.
(after a second look full screen)
On the other hand, just leave it. It really works as it is in my opinion.