[Don Schaeffer]

I drew
a schematic of a tree
not the right color
I didn't need to be correct.
The approximation
with hyperboles of the grass
moved,
spun my head.
I thought it
almost right.

[NT73]

I like the schematic of your tree,
Although the colour is not right,
The whole scene is rather striking,
Even though it looks quite bright.

[Don Schaeffer]

It was bright, brighter than I could ever photograph it.