[funkymunky]

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[Wall-E]

and more

The lions. Why B&W? And so little contrast? The composition is awkward. Dead center again.

The monkey. Weird color. Interesting bokeh though.

The bee. You love dead center. I would crop it so the bee is on the right thirds line.

Your family? Cute snapshot. Way too much depth of field.

Now you're getting somewhere. Repetition. Diagonals from a corner.
If you can shoot that again, try it with an even stronger angle to the diagonal.

[MrB]

Does the last one need the landscape?

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Philip

[John M]

Wall-E is right - too much dead centre. Nothing wrong with dead centre per se, but if that is what you do, you need some other dynamic in the picture to make it work - usually it doesn't.

And I agree with Mr B - you do not need the green in the ironwork. Personally, I would have gone for a more vertical shot and made the lines do everything.

[funkymunky]

thanks peeps, i do like that trailer, i think i spent about and 1hr or so around, i dont know why i chose dead centre its not something i do all the time. i have decided to stick with landscape views for my work. so i will be posting more later on today. thanks again for your critiques i am finding it very useful.