Mar 15, 2015, 16:53
I like taking industrial shots. This is for critique. Could have done landscape, but this shot is more impressive, or so I think. Anyway only enhancement is B&W and "vibrancy" in Paintshop. My Nikon Coolpix, fixed lens, zoom, autofocus. Feel free to critique........
Mar 15, 2015, 18:32
Perhaps a crop to remove the bits of the tall tree from the left hand side?
Cheers. Philip
Mar 15, 2015, 22:37
Mar 16, 2015, 01:56
E.g. If it were mine, I would go for a 2:3 crop, something like this -
It looks rather odd to me to see a tree without its trunk. (Of course there are exceptions, e.g. when the foliage is being used to frame the subject.) Cheers. Philip
Mar 17, 2015, 00:12
Actually, I thought about doing that, but for some strange reason, I kind of liked the tree.................Yes, you are right, and it is better. Thanks.
(Mar 16, 2015, 01:56)MrB Wrote: E.g. If it were mine, I would go for a 2:3 crop, something like this -
Mar 17, 2015, 13:17
(Mar 17, 2015, 00:12)czkid Wrote: Actually, I thought about doing that, but for some strange reason, I kind of liked the tree... If you like the tree, and if you are able to capture the scene again, perhaps you could compose a shot that includes the whole tree. That new image might tell a different story, contrasting the Man-Made Towers - those two chimneys, with Mother Nature's Tower - the tall tree; and also contrasting the environmental opponents - the first probably emitting carbon dioxide and the second absorbing it.  Cheers. Philip
Mar 25, 2015, 07:53
(Mar 15, 2015, 16:53)czkid Wrote: I like taking industrial shots. This is for critique. Could have done landscape, but this shot is more impressive, or so I think. There is a distinct "lightening" apparent in the screen image on the lft-hand vertical one inch or so. keep the tree, burn-in the LHS to match the rest.
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