Mar 12, 2005, 14:43
![[Image: hallwaySM.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/hallwaySM.jpg) ![[Image: skylightSM.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/skylightSM.jpg) ![[Image: displaycounterSM.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/displaycounterSM.jpg)
Nikon D3100 with Tokina 28-70mm f3.5, (I like to use a Vivitar .43x aux on the 28-70mm Tokina), Nikkor 10.5 mm fisheye, Quanteray 70-300mm f4.5, ProOptic 500 mm f6.3 mirror lens. http://donschaefferphoto.blogspot.com/ 
Mar 14, 2005, 00:38
In the first picture I would remove the blue sign. it is a bit distracting. In this way, I would give more attention to the people walking. I would crop like so. It gives to me more sense of depth, and the isle with plants wouldn't be too centered.
![[Image: 26_hallwaySM.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/26_hallwaySM.jpg) Because of the crop you did in this one I would like to make it B&W, and remove the light spots around... I find them a bit distracting. ![[Image: skylightSM2.jpg]](http://www.shuttertalk.com/forums/images/upload/skylightSM2.jpg) The third one, I am really sorry, but I can't find the message. There is a lot of information in the image... Hope this helps. Irma. A work of art which did not begin in emotion is not art. Paul Cezanne 
Mar 14, 2005, 00:57
Nice Don. I think it might work maybe as part of a series?
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